Would like to raise a possible improvement on appointment scheduling. When I receive an appointment, there is a "Repeats" section that describes how the appointment will re-occur in future,
Repeats: Every Wednesday End after 10 occurrence(s) Effective Aug 15, 2011

To be frank, I could not understand this sentence very well at first sight, I guess the reason is simply no commas or any other separator, and no preposition used (correct me if this is not right)?

Does the following sounds more clear?
Repeats: On Every Wednesday, for 10 occurrence(s), Effective from Aug 15, 2011


Fu Yong